Critique Candy

November 11, 2014  •  Leave a Comment

David Blecman's Annapolis Photography Workshop Group hosted a critique/competition tonight with the theme of candy. Here are my three entries. I didn't win anything.

David said my first shot titled "Lollipop" that the background was overexposed by a half stop to a stop.

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David said my second entry title "Thin Ribbon Candy" wasn't sharp and he didn't like the little bit of candy sticking up at the very end of the ribbon.

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Here is my last entry. This is my niece Samantha and what's left of her Halloween candy. I cut a box to just the right size and cut out a place for her neck. I put a pillow in the bottom and she laid down with her head in the box. Then I filled it with candy. Sam was a great sport so I had to use enter one.

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Oh well maybe I'll have better luck next month. The theme is kitchen utensils.


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